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All the Words - Page 04

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It's been quite a while, huh? I had this page drawn... well, I think a month ago. I just couldn't scan it. But now, it's finally done, yes.
I think this one can actually explain some things... not much but still.

As you can see, I played a bit with shading this time (torches and candles, I hate youuuuuuuu), but I'm not sure if I should stick with it. Probably not.

One little advice - don't ever try to listen to music when writing speech bubbles. Or vice versa. IMPOSSIBRU.

Fun Fact #02 - This page is actually two combined into one. That's how much I want to kick Octy and V out of this damn castle.

Anyways, enjoy.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The Shading went excellent, and the majority of the lines seem well drawn. However, there seem to be what's left of some old lines, which should have been erased better. try not drawing quite so hard on the initial sketch. also, some of the lines don't seem quite filled in, I'd reccomend going back over every thing carefully and slowly if you're doing it by hand to make it look crisper. finally, while the story is well done, Luna seems to be rambling, almost as if she's taking no heed of the ponies she's summoned. I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not, so all i can say is make her a bit more aware of the other two in the room. Other than that, I can find no real problem with how the piece was done, excellent job.